After showing our piece to the class they gave us positive and negative feedback in order for us to understand what we have done successfully and what can be changed to make it even better.
Positive Points (What we did well):
Good cuts
Fitting Mise en scene - noir thriller feel
Sound fit well (in time to movement)
What we could do to make it better:
Make the music less 'cheery'
Use more angles in running scene
Add more narative to make story more clear
Make screen bigger
Add more 'professional' titles
We will take these points all into account when adding to our final piece, we hope to make our piece as professional as possible in order to gain a high mark.
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